The Wheel - Revision history

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 ====[[Expectations for E-consultation#The consulters|The Consulters]]====
-The Wheel team expected the e-consultaion would provide a good opportunity to learn and experience another method of reaching out the clients.  this was important becasue it was a break from traditional methods, whihc were viewed as problematic.
+The Wheel team expected the e-consultation would provide a good opportunity to learn and experience another method of reaching out the clients.  This was important because it was a break from traditional methods, which were viewed as problematic.
 Two concerns were:
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 ====[[Expectations for E-consultation#The Consultees|The Consultees]]====
-Consultees had mixed feelings about e-consultation; some were positive, others were negative.  Their experience varied from simply proficiency in IT to inter-agency consultation.  Expectations were also varied.  For example, some hoped that everyone's views would be heard and have an affect on planning, whilst others wanted a better understanding of the e-consultation methodlogy.
+Consultees had mixed feelings about e-consultation; some were positive, others were negative.  Their experience varied from simply proficiency in IT to inter-agency consultation.  Expectations were also varied.  For example, some hoped that everyone's views would be heard and have an affect on planning, whilst others wanted a better understanding of the e-consultation methodology.
 ==[[Consultation Data Generated]]==

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 ==[[Consultation Data Generated]]==
 Feedback provided suggested that:
-*[[Consultation Data Generated#Who is an ‘active citizen’?|being an active citizen]] is about, for example, empowering others, being pro-active, and Representing the under-represented
+*[[Consultation Data Generated#Who is an ‘active citizen’?|being an active citizen]] is about, for example, empowering others, being pro-active, and representing the under-represented.
-*[[Consultation Data Generated#What should the role of the State be in ‘active citizenship’?|the state]] is considered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
+*[[Consultation Data Generated#What should the role of the State be in ‘active citizenship’?|the state]] is considered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility, whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
 ==[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial]]==

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 Feedback provided suggested that:
 *[[Consultation Data Generated#Who is an ‘active citizen’?|being an active citizen]] is about, for example, empowering others, being pro-active, and Representing the under-represented
-*[[Consultation Data Generated#|the state]] is considered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
+*[[Consultation Data Generated#What should the role of the State be in ‘active citizenship’?|the state]] is considered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
 ==[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial]]==

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 ==[[Consultation Data Generated]]==
 Feedback provided suggested that:
-*[Consultation Data Generated#Who is an ‘active citizen’?|being an active citizen] is about, for example, empowering others, being pro-active, and Representing the under-represented
+*[[Consultation Data Generated#Who is an ‘active citizen’?|being an active citizen]] is about, for example, empowering others, being pro-active, and Representing the under-represented
-*the state is consdiered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
+*[[Consultation Data Generated#|the state]] is considered by some to have no role, because it is about individual responsibility whilst others suggest the state needs to train and educate active citizenship.
 ==[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial]]==

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 ==[[Consultation Data Generated]]==
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+Feedback provided suggested that:
 ==[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial]]==

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 The researcher's report produced five conclusions from this e-consultation case:
 #This is an effective way to collect tacit knowledge from people.
-#The multiple routes for submission worked, so bridging the [www.digitaldivide.org digital divide].
+#The multiple routes for submission worked, so bridging the [http://www.digitaldivide.org digital divide].
 #The technological support does not require a lot of work by consulters.
 #Publicity is needed to bring people to an e-consultation web site.

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 *[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial#Benefits|Benefits]]:
-#In contrast to tradition consultaion methods, e-consultation is of lower cost
+#In contrast to tradition consultation methods, e-consultation is of lower cost.
-#Submissions suggest that, although the [[Expectations for E-consultation#The Consultees|participant]] population as small, the quality of participation was good.
+#Submissions suggest that, although the [[Expectations for E-consultation#The Consultees|participant]] population was small, the quality of participation was good.
 ==[[Conclusion]]==

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 *[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial#Problems|Problems]]:
 #[http://www.wheel.ie The Wheel] was unable to expend resources on promoting the e-consultation, which resulted in low participation numbers.
-#[[Expectations for E-consultation#The consulters|Consulter]] turnover was high resulting in a knoweldge gap at [http://www.wheel.ie the Wheel].  This negatively affected the consultation process.
+#[[Expectations for E-consultation#The consulters|Consulter]] turnover was high resulting in a knowledge gap at [http://www.wheel.ie the Wheel].  This negatively affected the consultation process.
 *[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial#Benefits|Benefits]]:

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 ====[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial#Issues of participation|Issues of participation]]====
-In realtion to participation, two problems and two benefits were identified:
+In relation to participation, two problems and two benefits were identified:
 *[[Outcomes from the e-consultation trial#Problems|Problems]]:
 #[http://www.wheel.ie The Wheel] was unable to expend resources on promoting the e-consultation, which resulted in low participation numbers.